Broken^Minded^Warrior

Welcome! Yeah, pretty strange to hear that from a new b, but anyway... Well, Kyte and Sunny pretty much nailed it, except for in "Paul got an evil eyes from ...

Good job! "Bad picture quality?" This is excellent! Sorry if this doesn't help you any, but I literally could not see any of the things that the other member pointed ...

Ooops, sorry for the double post... :oops: :oops: :oops:

Good job! Honestly (personal opinion), this sounds great sung. Perhaps you could consider posting this in the "Lyrics" section The only thing I could really find wrong was that you ...

Umm... Hi, all you peoples! Is this a no chat-speak site? If it is, then I'm sorry if i ever use it... Old habits... Anyways, this person, username of Fire ...

Wow, it seems really awkward, a new member greeting a new member, but hi and welcome, anyways! you said " I've been looking everywhere for a reliable beta reader/crit exchange/writing ...

So, you just today joined? Me, too. Welcome, new person!